Work in progress so far!
And here’s the full zone so far! I’m done fighting with embeds on WordPress for the moment.
(I think I said somewhere that scene 16 was the second-to-last scene in Zone 1, but then I realized that the transitional part was its own scene. So, scene 17 is the second-to-last scene in Zone 1–hilariously, that’s what it is in my storyboards, BUT I’d cut an earlier scene introducing Knuckles/Hank for time, and because I thought the AK-47 scene that was filled in/written later was as good or better as his introduction. So yay, accidentally getting my storyboards corrected.)
Getting hit HARD by the mind changes!
I actually really like mind changes in TF, though I HATE identity death. Part of that’s a values issue, part’s preference, but a large part is, well, what’s the point of it being a TF, then? I’m just a big fan of glorying in the difference the TF makes in the person’s life. I like the contrast. As always, I’m a sucker for the TF being a change for good in the individual’s life, BUT, that doesn’t mean it doesn’t present new difficulties. That’s the place I love to live. How does this unmitigated good fuck up these people’s days? I’m very much of the wish fulfillment brand of TF fans, AND I like to see the more grounded consequence. Look. I’m Otherkin and trans. There’s fallout to the things that are important, and while there’s a place for stories where it’s just the fluffliness, I want to explore what happens after that wish is granted. I love that shit.
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